Questions about flyer text

GTLC

LawnSite Senior Member
Hey guys this may be a stupid question, but I am making my new flyer and was wondering what sounds better and more professional to put on the flyer

"Lawnmowing" or just "mowing"

"Spring/Fall Clean-up", "Spring & Fall Clean-up" or
"Seasonal Clean-up"

Thanks
 
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GTLC

LawnSite Senior Member
And would you consider pruning and hedge trimming just "pruning"?
 
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GTLC

LawnSite Senior Member
Well I am listing more than that, but what I really meant was which wording out of the choices sounds better and more professional.
 
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GTLC

LawnSite Senior Member
How about "aeration" or "lawn aeration"
or "aerating" or "lawn aerating"?????

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harryhomeowner

LawnSite Member
Location
Fairfax, VA
My $.02.

Please get the spelling right. If your not going to be detail oriented enough to get your flyer correct are going to be detail oriented enough to do a good job at my house?

Got one today they are "liscensed & Insurd"...
 

Runner

LawnSite Fanatic
Location
Flint, Michigan
Yep. Just go with Mowing. Aeration is Core Aeration. For the shrub trimming, I just put Shrubbery and Ornamental Care. For the Clean-ups, I say Spring & Fall Cleanups.
Actually, what mine reads, is:
*Customized Fertilizer Programs
*Weed, Insect, and Disease Control
*Commercial & Residential
*Complete Lawn & Landscape Maintenance
* Lawn Renovation / Seeding / Sodding
*Core Aeration
*Spring & Fall Cleanup
These are some of what are listed on the back of my card.
 


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