Review My Business Card?

Discussion in 'Starting a Lawn Care Business' started by Logan Graham, Jul 18, 2009.

  1. Logan Graham

    Logan Graham LawnSite Member
    Messages: 8

    You may have seen my other thread about my flyer, but this one's about my business card. I tried to keep it clean and simple. I'm 14 and I'm looking to make some money this summer.

    Hopefully you like!

  2. redmax fan

    redmax fan LawnSite Bronze Member
    Messages: 1,473

    ide change the vertical lines between each service you offer ,
    to either these / or these - between each word
  3. THC

    THC LawnSite Silver Member
    Messages: 2,020

    I don't like it, it's hard to read and you don't need to make all the letters so large.
  4. LouisianaLawnboy

    LouisianaLawnboy LawnSite Silver Member
    Messages: 2,199

    It looks like it says "I mowing"
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  5. redmax fan

    redmax fan LawnSite Bronze Member
    Messages: 1,473

    or maybe between each service use these ~ in green
  6. TomberLawn

    TomberLawn LawnSite Bronze Member
    Messages: 1,299

    I agree, the | between each service is a little confusing to look at. Some other symbol will look better. There is a lot of white space on either side of your phone number/Call block. A simple graphic like some grass or something related would fill it in and give a person a general idea of what you do even before reading the card. Make sure your phone number is large enough to be read on a card that's 2x3.25". It looks big here, but your image is about 10x bigger than an actual card would be. I would take out the "Call Logan!" line and make you phone number bigger, and maybe make the "Call for FREE estimate" a little bigger as well.

    Small, simple changes. You've got a great start.
  7. kregan

    kregan LawnSite Member
    Messages: 25

    Looks good but I would tweak it a little...

    I would:

    1) reduce the font size of the & between lawn and garden.
    2) replace | with a bullet round or diamond.
    3) replace "call Logan" with just "call"
    4) replace "call for free estimates" with "free estimates"
  8. redmax fan

    redmax fan LawnSite Bronze Member
    Messages: 1,473

    for me i like the personal touch of ' call logan ' ,
    makes me feel like im talking to the person in
    charge so we can get everything crystal clear
  9. topsites

    topsites LawnSite Fanatic
    Messages: 21,653


    You can shorten all that to:
    Logan's lawn & garden
    Call Today for Free Estimates!

    Oh... I think your phone will ring :laugh:
  10. Runner

    Runner LawnSite Fanatic
    Messages: 13,497

    What Topsites just said is the perfect post. I would like to add to that for example; "yardwork". You list all these say yardwork at the end is redundant.
    That's like saying we do dusting, vacuuming, wash walls, do windows, and and clean the bathroom and kitchen. Oh yeah,...we also do housework.
    Not to mention, we don't use the term "yard" in any professional term, anyway. I can elaborate a little more on that if you wish or need.

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