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sorry bout that here is my flyer

Discussion in 'Lawn Mowing' started by paridise, Feb 28, 2005.

  1. paridise

    paridise LawnSite Member
    Messages: 25

    Let me know what i need to do to make it better

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  2. ChadA

    ChadA LawnSite Senior Member
    Messages: 521

    IMO I would change the "if you have any questions" part to something like Call today for your free no obligation estimate. Every thing else looks OK
  3. Lawnchoice

    Lawnchoice LawnSite Senior Member
    Messages: 781

    I would change some of the wording in this section as well:

    At Paridise Landscaping we take pride in quality and dependable service. As a special offer if you sign up for our yearly program before March 20, you will receive a 15% discount.

    Paridise Landscaping offers high quality, dependable service.

    One another line or in a different font I would then apply your discount.

    At the end you might want to consider something like:

    Call today for a free onsite consultation.

    Not bad though, you have the right idea.
  4. walker-talker

    walker-talker LawnSite Platinum Member
    from Midwest
    Messages: 4,771

    How many do you plan on sending out?
  5. Summertime Lawn

    Summertime Lawn LawnSite Member
    Messages: 38

    FYI...Paradise not paridise.
  6. LWNMWR1

    LWNMWR1 LawnSite Member
    Messages: 188

    i don't see alot of flyers in my area but when i do there is always some kind of "deal". good luck with the deal i don't need to offer reductions and if you work hard and have great service you won't need to discount your hard work either.
  7. Legacy

    Legacy LawnSite Member
    Messages: 160

    That was my question too...Are you mispelling the name on purpose?

    Customers might find this a bit odd.....I sure did

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