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what do you think of my spiffy web site

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let me know what you guys think?

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Looks fine.

Personally, I'd cull the grass background and stick with a solid dark color.

The scissors seem to connote attention to detail which is nice.

"we are always willing to adapt to your needs"...sounds a little desperate, like you will do anything IMO...I like words like: we will conduct a fully customized client needs analysis or site evaluation, customized to your needs, etc...JMO

That's sort of funny.

Your version, when I read it, sounds politically correct, which seems like a desperate attempt to avoid just shooting from the hip and saying the same thing if far fewer words.

On my page, I simply say we look forward to their needs and questions. Short and to the point.

I can't see myself adding on my home page "we anticipate and welcome establishing effective two-way communication with you to ascertain site conditions that are important to you"

Looks like we all have our own style of desparation.

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