which flyer looks better

Discussion in 'Business Operations' started by terrapro, Mar 6, 2007.

  1. terrapro

    terrapro LawnSite Bronze Member
    Messages: 1,234

    heres two i just threw together. which one is best or any suggestions too. thanks


  2. Grn Mtn

    Grn Mtn LawnSite Senior Member
    Messages: 863

    of the two the top is better but neither really grabs my attention.

    a ":" is needed after services, and a "-" is needed after semi(-monthly).
    be careful about saying you put down organic fert, in NY you need a license to apply even some organic ferts.
  3. toac

    toac LawnSite Senior Member
    Messages: 349

    as stated above...nothing really grabs my attention. i think you would be better off without the graphic. it doesn't really do anything for the flyer.
  4. Grn Mtn

    Grn Mtn LawnSite Senior Member
    Messages: 863

    better yet, just say "multiple billing choices"...
  5. terrapro

    terrapro LawnSite Bronze Member
    Messages: 1,234

    fert is legal to spread in MI. semimonthly is spelled correctly look it up. i have taken note of the colon. thanks for the suggestions

    so the graphics dont help fill the space and introduce the services. any suggestions
  6. MOOSE

    MOOSE LawnSite Senior Member
    Messages: 393

    You should've been working on this a few weeks ago.

    Went out today to give an estimate and one of my clients had 3 flyers on there mailbox.
  7. Matts Lawns

    Matts Lawns LawnSite Member
    Messages: 33

    The top one, I guess. I would atleast print this on colored paper if you can't get some color in there another way.
  8. terrapro

    terrapro LawnSite Bronze Member
    Messages: 1,234

    yeah i was thinking green. i can get $.07 copies on colored paper at staples. from the people ive shown these to its pretty much 50/50 so i might do 250 of each

    on paper everyone seems to like the 2nd one. ill just try both

    thanks for the replies
  9. Runner

    Runner LawnSite Fanatic
    Messages: 13,497

    I would use a hyphen in Semi-monthly. Also, on the first one, move the Or Weekly Maintenance over one space to the right. the left margin alignment is off, otherwise. Other than that, that'll work!
  10. Precise

    Precise LawnSite Member
    from Mideast
    Messages: 11

    its going to be hard to get calls without the whole phone number lol

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